PeruGloria enhiesta en milenios de historia…

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Hi, I am trying to write an essay and English is not my mother tongue. Please check my text for mistakes, thank you: "The Peruvian population is estimated at more than 28 million people (2008). It has a multi-ethnic origin, a mixture of high percentage of indigenous people and those of European and Asian ascendance. This mixture of cultural traditions has resulted in a wide range of expressions in fields such as arts, literature, music and cuisine. Spanish is the most widely spoken and the main language, although a significant number of Peruvians speak different native languages such as Quechua, the second language in the country. Peru is a developing country with high human development index has seen an increase in revenue and a decrease its poverty level to 28%. Its main economic activities are agriculture, fisheries, mining and textile manufacturing. "Diana

"The population of Peru was estimated at more than 28 million people in 2008. The population is of ethnic origin, a mixture of a high percentage of people indigenous and those of European and Asian ancestors. This mixture of cultural traditions has resulted in a great diversity of expression in fields such as art, literature, music and cuisine. Spanish is the most talked about and the main language, although a significant number of Peruvians speak different native languages such as Quechua, the second language in the country. Peru is a developing country with high human development index has seen an increase in revenue and a decrease in poverty level up to 28%. Its main economic activities are agriculture, fisheries, mining and textile manufacturing. "What is this?

Bolivia 2008